another Sparkling Book, written by Marcus

Mr. Angry
Once upon a time, there's a child called Mavpuisfemore. She is very
very very bad. She always said there is a monster going to eat you so
her dad was very angry. So everyone called him Mr. Angry.
Everyday her dad was very very very angry. They are in a jungle. They live in the jungle. Do you know what her dad do everyday? Every morning her dad will feed the lions and the tigers.
His child lives in the jungle. She likes to live in the jungle. Because she can catch birds.
One day Mavpuisfemore saw the cub feed the daddy lion. Then Mavpuisfemore became a good girl. Her dad Mr. Angry became Mr. Happy.
Compared with his first book 6 months ago, Marcus can now write longer sentences. The story is still quite simple. Personally I actually prefer the story in his second book.
Guess what Marcus likes most about his new book?
It's the name Mavpuisfemore! He particularly made up a very difficult and long name.
"You can't read it unless you know phonics!"
First book : Rescue MarcusSecond book: Naughty Daddy
音樂男孩 2009-11-06 22:00
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