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上回說過﹕回消費者信﹐如貨物不可退換﹐說話要婉轉。可是﹐消費者並非笨蛋﹐你轉彎抹曲的說一大堆客套話﹐有消費者認為你不老實﹐不誠懇。
所以有教授認為說話要誠懇﹐直接。
例如這篇信﹕
Dear Ms. X:
Over the years, we have found that the best credit risks are those who pay their bills in a timely manner.(理由) Since two of your payments have been late, we cannot extend store credit to you now. (拒絕消費者的提議) Come back with a record of six months of prompt payments, and you'll get a different answer.
You might want to consider our layaway plan. Under our plan, you have six months to pay for your purchases. (給消費者另一個提議)
Sincerely,
那個方法好些﹖
我覺得因人而異。有人喜歡說話直接﹐有人喜歡客套話。說來說去﹐都是因消費者心水而定。


ttgg123 2009-09-27 14:31
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