我的妹妹

I agree with Nicole. This piece that you wrote not only told us about your sister Christy, but also told us about you. Behind your writing, we can feel how much you love and care about your sister. For me, you are a model "Big Sister". No wonder your mom is very proud of you!  I hope you'll continue to write some of your blogs in Chinese. I like the way you write because you wrote it in the proper Chinese way, easier for me to understand. You remind me of my days when I had my 作文 classes when I was your age.Mind you though, my skills in writing was not as good as yours at that age.

You treat your sister very well. It's very encouraging that you ask her to work hard together with to achieve better results.

When you write the chinese writings in blog, do you use the chinese write pad?

看了你這一篇後，除了對你妹妹多了認識之外，也感受到你很疼愛弟妹呢！！相信你是一個好的姐姐！

Oh!!!

我現在才發現，你已經寫了「我的弟弟/my brother」。

Sorry!!!!

哇！你的中文挺不錯呢！看過你寫的一篇「我的妹妹」之後，我的確對她了解多了，我覺得你和妹妹都很聰明。

我有個要求：你可否寫一篇「我的弟弟」呢？

你的妹妹會寫作，會彈琴，會攀石，很本事。看了這篇，覺得你的中文文章寫得很好，繼續努力！