I went to Hong Kong Space Museum with my family this morning.
After lunch, we went to Wanchai Pier by bus. Then we went to Hong Kong Space Museum by ferry.
When we arrived there, we played games in the exhibition halls first. I felt the games was so excited. Then we watched the film in the space theatre. The film was bored. It is the worst film in my mind.
If there isn't any change, I will never get again.
Evan
p.s.Can you help me to correct the grammar ?
Blue Whale 2008-07-14 21:39
Evan
Blue Whale 2008-07-14 12:14
睇落都幾好玩吖, 都唔係你講到咁悶. 其實太空館有好多野睇, 好多野學, 唔係只係玩架! 去一次根本睇/學唔哂! 有機會, 你大過d, 再去既話, 一定有新既體會!
Grammar? It's not bad. "I felt the games was so excited." You can be excited, but the games should be "exciting". Again, "The film was bored." The film should be boring so it makes you bored. "I will never get again." What does that mean? By the way, at the very beginning you said you went to Space Museum in the morning, but later you said it's after lunch, what does that mean???