Writting 1

Tim was playing a computer game called ‘adventure at Cox Castle’.  It was a game about a fighter Mike saving a princess in Cox Castle.  Tim had played for three hours.  He felt tired but he went on playing.  Suddenly Tim saw something strange on the screen. Mike was taliking to him!
‘Hello, Tim.  I need your help.  A witch has kidnapped Princess Kate and put her in cox Castle.  I want to save her.  Please help me,’ Said Mike. 
‘But how can I get into the computer?’ asked Tim. 
‘ Close your eyes and stretch out your hands,’ said Mike. 
When Tim opened his eyes, he was already in the forest.  He tried to find Mike but he could no.  suddenly a fairl\y aapeared. 
‘Follow me to the magic cave.  You’ll find one magic tool there.  They can help you save the princess,’ said the fairy. 
Tim went to the magic cave with the fairy and took the magic tool.  Then he thanked the fairy and set off for Cox Castle. 
The magic tool was a magic key. It used for open the Cox Castle door. Tim went to the Cox Castle by sitting on the flying carpet. He was very stunning because the door was very small. It was make of wood. Tim used the magic key to open the door. In the castle, Tim saw a monster. Tim picked up the sword on the floor. Tim used the sword to kill the monster. He found the princess in the cage. He used the sword to open the cage. The princess did not hurt. In that time, the fairy appeared and sent Tim back home. Tim went back home and turn off the computer immediately.